Comments : Mothers Against Deadly Deputies

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Wow Michael. This really touched my heart.
    I feel like the world itself has not much changed it is the people making it a rather unsafe place. Crimes of any kind are on the rise and even authorities can't stop it. We have to forgive and keep on praying. Excellent written and added to my favorite.

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    It means a lot to me thank you

    https://youtu.be/XRXQAxdg7rg

  • 8 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Nominated I will comment in detail much later.

  • 8 years ago

    by GB

    Weekly contest June 1st
    Judging comment:

    I like the great wisdom and message behind this poem, direct words, smooth flow and resonant tone, in this mad world perfection is an illusion indeed. Very neat writing.