Comments : My Loss

  • 8 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I like the way you wrote it, you made the center alignment work for you and that's great! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ankita

    Thnks

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is excellent - love the structure too. Then ending really hits the mark. Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Aashi

    The last line really made me feel something.
    Very nice.

  • 6 years ago

    by Tushar

    Be happy.. Life is a infinite loop.. Never stops.. Stay optimistic.. Great words ???? ????????