Comments : The girl in white.

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Welcome to pandq. This is a wonderful poem. :) nominated

  • 8 years ago

    by nancy

    Very nice poem.
    Nowadays, people rarely give attention to the decrease in oxygen in the air arround us.
    Very well written.

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is an interesting concept, although the piece feels a little too basic - at least for my taste. The structuring works well but the word choice and voice are bland. Again, decent concept and I'd like to read more from you, but 3/5 from me for now.

    Also, belated welcome.

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Well written.

  • 8 years ago

    by Azrael

    Well written, I do enjoy the symbolism that you used. Makes you think.