Comments : Once Upon A Time

  • 8 years ago

    by Shruti

    Really well written. Sad emotions can be clearly felt. I love it.
    5/5
    *do smile :-)*

  • 8 years ago

    by J Nair

    More the lines of happy notes,
    more it conveys of lonely thoughts, makes the reader wonder,
    what is eating up your Now....

    Sensitive poem Surbhi.
    Good work. loved reading your poem.
    J