I like the story told here daughter, it seems like you were writing about your past and then it started to turn into something else and I enjoyed read it. 5/5

- Moria Bella Bair

"Our souls are forever tainted
just like the canvas is painted
with the lies that we tell,
and the secrets we keep."

This is an amazing closer.
I love how truly honest this poem is.
It's slightly dark but so is life, just remember there is light too.

Wonderfully written.