Comments : Once upon a never

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    *"to a bright new day" maybe?

    Anyway, I love this piece as sad as it is, although the last line promises hope. Powerful stuff. I love the switch from "never" to "time", which, as above, is the crux of the hope in the poem.

    • 8 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thanks ben. i feel like im creating false hope but false hope is better than none i suppose

  • 8 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    Sad but hopeful. A lovely piece. I do hope it all works out for you.

  • 8 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I think we have all been here in this moment, and felt this way.

    Short, but expresses an emotion felt within that moment!

    Great!