Comments : Last Slow Dance

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    "I would search until my bones mix with the very sands themselves" - what a wonderfully written poem and I love that line.

    • 8 years ago

      by M Nioni

      Thank you very much. I was just reading one of yours before I posted this. "I Am A Living Tempest". I really enjoyed it. It was magnificent.

  • 8 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    This is just so beautiful and sad. The imagery is superb and I love the flow, I can almost her the music and see the dance. Poignant and bittersweet I love it. :)

    • 8 years ago

      by M Nioni

      If my words are enough to elicit images of it in your head, then I've accomplished what I set out to do.
      I appreciate you taking the time to read it. Thank you.

  • 8 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    You say you seek to evoke clear images with your poetry: you have succeeded.

    • 8 years ago

      by M Nioni

      Thank you very much. That means a lot to me.