Comments : I Am

  • 8 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ah, Joey I never read your work before but am looking forward to reading.

    So anyone who knows me well knows I don't like repitition in a poem, but I actually really enjoyed the use of "I try" here. I like the way you use it, perfectly punctuated too!

    And I actually found this poem to be encouraging because you use that word. Its a feeling we've all been through but if its something we see someone actually is trying to push through it.

    Well done.

    • 8 years ago

      by Joey Matthews

      I know how you feel, I'm not a big fan of repeating lines but inspired by a friends work - I decided to write my feelings about being forgetful. I think this comes across as a depressive poem also though.

      Thank you for taking the time to comment on this, I appreciate your kind words Chelsey.