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  • 8 years ago

    by Shruti

    A really dark and depressing poem. But still very good.
    Umm...look at the 5th line -
    "The emptyness is to heavy for her to take"
    ^I think it should be 'emptiness' and 'too'...
    Overall it's very nice.
    & welcome to Poems and Quotes.
    Keep writing.
    5/5
    ~S

    • 8 years ago

      by Allie

      Thank you, I didn't even notice that!

    • 8 years ago

      by Allie

      Thank you! I didn't even notice that!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Such a personal piece which others can relate to.
    Written well

    • 8 years ago

      by Allie

      I try to keep my writting as real as possible, I want people to relate to what I write, to let them know they aren't alone. I know what that feels like and it sucks!