Comments : 24

  • 8 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Peace is relative; perhaps it is a will-o-the-wisp, pulling us deeper in the quagmire seeking it.

    Your poem reads like a walk-through of a plan in which you discover the deeper consequences. It's like revelation. Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Melvin,

    The title made me initially think of 24 hours, so a surprise to see it was years. I like the refrain on ' a leap of faith' I like the 'everybody vs nobody, eleph(ants) and the personification of the 'eager ground' All in all a neat, clever write.

    Well done,

    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Melvin,
    A clever write here. Keep it up.

    Em