I like this alot because it speaks volumes.

You Smile When Your Happy
You Cry When You Sad
But What Do You Do When Your Both ?
What Do You Do When Your Breaking ?
And NoOne Can Fix You ?
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Yes, we smile when happy and cry when sad but what do we do when breaking. We all have our own ways of dealing with stress, dealing when we are breaking and we realise our own strength once the storm is over.

You Get Mad & Punch Things
You Cry & Have Red Eyes After
What Do You Do When Nothing Helps ?
Do You Suck It Up & Realize NoOne Cares Or Do You Blank Out & Stare At The Wall , Wishing & Hoping You Could Disappear ....
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This stanza shows the things people can do when stressed. Cry, smile, hit out or just hope to disappear.

Great write but I think all the capitals set the flow off.

Em