Comments : Natural Desaster

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Elijah,

    welcome to PnQ's

    You certainly know how to make an entrance. I like the form, the internal rhyme and the general feeling of frustrated anger. I imagine if a Earth could speak it would rant at man's carelessness and downright abuse.

    A thought provoking write from you,

    well done,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Wow what a piece.
    This world is in shatters and you wrote this well.

    Although 'desaster' is spelt disaster.