Comments : Crumble

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Michael,

    A real heartfelt piece with an unforced rhyme and structure that help keep the flow and piece smooth.

    I like the message in this as life can be tough and sometimes things like love etc do not help, it can be a long slog but we all get there in the end.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em for your comments. And yes hope is all we have to get there