Comments : Not the First

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An excellent portrayal of the demon of drink emotional and visual with strong theme

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is such a sad yet beautiful piece. I feel it's based on a personal experience. The visuals and the emotions are all real.
    The rhyme makes the piece flow smoothly.

    Take care, Em