Comments : My First Love.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Linda, this is really powerful and meaningful. I feel it is personal aswell and many people can relate to it. When you love/lust someone even their scent is beautiful and I don't mean their aftershave/perfume I mean their smell.

    by hyperventilating into the scent of you
    I could momentarily

    breathe.
    ^^
    Loved this part because just in that moment of smelling his/her scent you could breathe.

    Beautiful, Em