Comments : A love unspoken

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Hello Sagarika...this is what love is and we can at times be blinded and fooled by it. When you think that this love is for sure, along comes a big wave and crashes it all...never to worry maybe he is not the right one for you..

    As for the poem itself you have written it nicely and with some punctuation and breaking up of lines it will look and read better...all the same well done and Welcome to the site!