Comments : Intangible

  • 7 years ago

    by Hellon

    You words paint such a sad picture for the reader. Although it's in the misc. section it feels, to me, as if it should be listed under sad poems...it's a sort piece by your usual standards. I loved the melancholy tone you managed to achieve in such a short poem.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A lovely flow to this poem that really does pull at the heart strings.
    As Hellon alludes to, this is a different write compared to what I have read of your work previously, but it is excellent nonetheless.

    SL

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Mahal, as Hellon and Sir L have stated this piece is unique compared to what you're used to writing and as a reader of your work it's very intriguing as to why this is such a sombre piece.

    All the best, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    great descriptive work here. The feeling of wistfulness is evident in this atmospheric piece.

    Well done and take care,

    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hello Kabayan (mahal ko kuya ko),

    It's very challenging to put everything,all the feelings you want to say in a short yet profound composition.. you are really a genius.

    from the Philippines,

    Geegoldrodriguez

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hello Kabayan (mahal ko kuya ko),

    It's very challenging to put everything,all the feelings you want to say in a short yet profound composition.. you are really a genius.

    from the Philippines,

    Geegoldrodriguez