I voted and came back to comment..

However I forgot what I was going to say!

So, well done on such a sad piece mr darcy

Hi there well done double acrostic. .

Excellent

Michael, this is wonderful acrostic and well written when the rain hits its hard to get out isn't it?
Em

I think it made it much better and smoother to read but I am biased lol good for a 'quickie.' *dirty laugh* :)

Michael, wonderful acrostic-very dark subject.
Depression feels a lot like it's raining a watershed in your head. Drowning would be a respite. Well done-

Excellent. Loved the rhyme and the gentle start progressing rapidly into gore lol Milly x

Thanks Milly. It's just what sprang to mind as I watched and listened to the rainstorm. X

Sir Michael,

is this a repost? ... it's raining inside you and you're dripping. ..hahaha joke. ... Nice double acrostic...

Gel