"story telling from the dark side of my head
does not follow your conventional text book literature"

Nice free flow composition. Nominated.

This was quite a long poem but your narration drew me in so much that I found myself wanting to go back to the start and read it again. I'm pretty sure this is going to be one of those poems that I keep coming back to...nice job!

Though long this kept me intrigued throughout. So glad its been nominated.

I wrote a really long comment then lost it :(