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  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, this is so deep and sad. I intaked a breath when I read about her clipping those angels wings leaving them to die a painful death. Such a beautiful dark write-

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Andrea, I am sorry you have (let's say) a turbulent relationship with your mother, I am the same but with my Dad.
    I know exactly how you feel though it is no compensation to your feelings

    All the best.
    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Andrea,

    this is a sad piece... I hope this is just a representation of what happened to other not to you.... It made my heart aches....so sad and graphic. ..:(

    but we'll done piece

    Gel

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Andrea,
    I know how it feels to have a not so good relationship with a mother.
    Its painful and we never forget (and in my case never forgive). Such a beautiful write and very descriptive. I ache for you.

  • 7 years ago

    by William Mae

    A lot of pain in so few words, even in the darkest of poetry, among the words with the greatest pain, I found beauty in the write.