Comments : Chapter Closed

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An inspirational call to arms for every woman who has been wronged, Gel, and proof that life can go on after the heartbreak!

    Well done,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Agreed with Ben and for men too.

    Great write. EM

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    A very well written piece Gel.
    I agree with benny and em. Well done!

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Gel, This is a wonderful call to arms for womanhood. I salute you girl!

  • 7 years ago

    by EVERLUCENT

    Best poem so far~

    xoxo :*

  • 7 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    The aggression is on!

    I like your thinkable power and some new type of imaginary. We humans start to think various strange stuffs after a heartbreak. Heartbreak really affects our souls and goals, the body becomes bloodless.

    The last segment is quite touching and full of emotions.

    Nice write.