Comments : The Night He Died

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    wow... that was so good. is this a true poem? i hope to god it's not.
    you wrote it really well and flows very good. keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow! That was very heart felt! You are so talented!! I love reading you poetry!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ashley

    that was one of the most true poems i have ever read....if i find out how to put you in favorties i will...1 question was that true?---itsjustme

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    OMG! That was so SAD!! You wrote it so wonderfully....but it was so sad. I had tears in my eyes!!
    Amy

  • 19 years ago

    by Nadiya

    Hey... Great poem, so sad it makes me wanna cry. I only have one guesstion did this really happen to you? If it did i'm so sorry. One time a guy almost killed himself cuz of me, but i got there in time and stoped him. Awesome poem
    ~Nadiya~

  • 19 years ago

    by candy

    that was awesome, and i really hope it isnt a true stroy, but it isnt yur fault. and kevin, shut the hell up, thats not even funny.

  • 19 years ago

    by Concealing Words

    great job, a lot of emotion and feelings into it. Keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Honey Kisses 18

    that made me cry it was so good and i am sorry

  • 19 years ago

    by Jaelly Longoria

    hey loved ur poem.... well i gave it five...and hopefully all that wasnt true...
    lol it kinda looks like Romeo and Juliet...
    GREAT!

  • 19 years ago

    by Roula

    beautiful poem, a very touching story, for the second time in my life i cry reading a poem ... you're good at capturing the reader's heart ... keep it up :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Cheri

    i have to say that that is a really good poem, even though it is probably the saddest poem i have ever read. I creied when i read it, and believe me i dont cry that often. is it a true story?

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    Id like to thank everyone for their nice coments, it really means a lot to me. And for all those ppl that asked..this isnt a true story, just something that popped into my mind. Thanks again

  • 19 years ago

    by Sammie Moore

    OMG! I love the emotion you put into this, Its like I was living it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Shannon

    your poem was so sad

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    this poem was amazing.. im really glad that it wasnt true.. but the way you wrote it it made it sound like you lived through it.. nice job, not many people can put that much emotion into something that hasnt happened to them. I loved it.. keep up the good work, cause this one was awsome. I gave it a 5

  • 19 years ago

    by jess

    u have such an awesome talent.....it made me cry!!!!! GREAT WORK
    *~*~jessycar~*~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    YAY finally someone realised where i got the idea from. lol. Yeah that song inspired me to write this.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    Thats was a Really Good Poem i had something like that happen to me and i know it sucks and there is not much i can say cause i dont know the pain you are feeling but i do hope you get over it someday and the same goes for me as well . Keep Writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessy

    Omg that was soooo sad oh it was good tho

  • 18 years ago

    by M

    Wow what a sad poem...its great and im crying right now