wow! that's really sad but also very good!

Hailey,
I really liked your power it was really powerful. It also makes you think alot. Well keep writing your really good at it. Well g2g bye!
Always,
Lindsay

I really loved this poem it was so good
My boyfriend died not to long ago its been about a month he didnt have cancer or anything like that he was in a car accident and he died of injuries he was only sixteen Umm keep up the good work your a VERY GOOD Writter
cara

That was awesome I loved it.

that was a great poem...good idea

This is a really good poem. My dad died about 7 month ago of cancer, and you really put your self in that place. It made me cry, but it was GREAT!

Casey

ThankYou EveryOne....Wierd Place I Put Myself In too Write This But Differant,..My Heart Goes Out To anyone Who has Lost Someone..Ive Never Lost Someone To Something Like That...But I Do Feel Alot For People..So Tahnks For Reading And Be Sure To Check out The Rest Of My Poems..Thankyou..Your All an Ispirtaion..Love Hailey

This poem is so sad....But it's very well written! Keep up the great work!
mwa!!!

hey,i read this poem many times,because you wrote it perfect,while I was reading I was thinking that it is a true story...
CIAO!!

that was really good i was balling as i read it.

Wow..ur really good.... :)