Comments : With Angels for Eternity

  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    It's hard to admit, but a single tear just rolled down mt cheek. You are amazing with words, keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Gayle

    That was brilliant, thank you for sharing that with us. Feel free to read mine and comment.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Snow queen~*

    this was a fab poem, you did the book justice im sure. Wut book was it? Well ne ways keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    Thank you all SO much for your comments! The book was called "A Dance Between Sisters" ... I sort of changed the plot and the ending, but the main idea is the same. A girl's mom died, her sister became depressed, and so the girl took up anorexia to stay in shape for dancing. She had an important role in her holiday performance, and didn't want her weight to affect her dancing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Shana

    ohhh that was so good! I love the poem! I give it a perfect 5***** great job! P.S. I read that book last year, its awesome

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    What can I say!!! Absolutely a sad but very beautiful piece. You are an absolutely talented and gifted young lady, that can go far with your writing poetry. Continue to keep up the beautiful work you do. You have been one of my favorites for along time. Take Care and God Bless! AFA lol

  • 19 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOW..wonderful poem..just wonderful..completely utterly wonderful!

  • 19 years ago

    by blarg

    i think this is one of your best poems ever!!!!love blarg ( i'm gonna read that book)
    p.s. i got a new poem called alltime sadness, do you think you could please take the time to read and leave a comment? it would be greatly appreciated!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by olivia

    that was absolutly amazing it brought tears to my eyes .. tehre arent even really werds to sum up the amazing job u did ..

  • 19 years ago

    by Paula

    It drove me to tears, very emotional but excellent none the less.x

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    that was so amazing it made me cry...and thats great because not many things can make me shead tears but this one did... nice job

  • 19 years ago

    by yolande the dreamer

    it was a beautiful poem and you captured it......what book did it come from???? my eyes were tearing and i almost cried. your other one, jimmy's almost birthday made me cry...

  • 19 years ago

    by stephyG

    omgg beautifull poem.. but sad keeps writting hun mwAAazz

  • 19 years ago

    by Kaylee

    i just wanted to say i absolutely loved this poem i was reading it in school and i just started crying... thats how much it touched me

  • definately made a beautiful poem, it brought tears to my eyes

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken

    that was really really really really touching....and you did a great job, it was beatiful...great job!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lipton

    You have an awesome gift! You are so good at this! Great job!

    ~ciao Lipton

  • 19 years ago

    by candy

    omg. that was so incredibly amazing. i know exactly how it feels to not want to eat until your passing out daily and can barely hold yourself up. awesome job. i wish i could write like that. I LOVED IT!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by kathy

    so sad and so good. sounds like an excellent book

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley

    That was really good. Very well written. I have not had the pleasure of reading that book but now that I have had the pleasure of reading this poem I think I will. Keep up the good work! Look forward to reading more of yours! 5/5 Peace and Love