Wow incredible hun...totally brilliant...I get it too (I hope <3) Love it muches...and love u muches xxx Keep up your incredible, phenomenal, ammmaazzzinngggg, outstanding, extrodinary poems! =) <3 xxxxxxxxx love ya

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCareHunniexx

thats alot of adjectives(is that what they are) well anyways, thank you

Aw so sad.. kinda physoctic.. yet I feel that way. o.o Anywho! I love the repitition! Keep up the good work!

The paranoia is almost unbearable
It’s pushing to my limit
The paranoia is almost unbearable
It’s telling me to end it

Lovely suicidal para. A 5
*v*

thank you all for your comments again, theyre all helpful

thanks,,, i was paranoid when i wrote it:P

Incredible....
...It's so quiet here all alone...
I love that line....Love,
E.

nice job!! keep it up!! :)

Interesting form! I like the repetition.
Good write!
5/5