Comments : Unwanted, Unloved and Worthless

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Excellent! please read some of mine when you have got time thanks :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    you know in that case, im the exact same, though i do it to myself. trust me its not much better with lots of people, lots more chances to get hurt. great poem, keep up the great work. i can always seem to relate to your poems, good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    that was so sad, i feel very unloved, and this poem just touched my heart. Keep up the good work!

  • 5 years ago

    by Mark Dark

    Am I a ghost as I walk through your life
    Does my voice not resonate as it reaches your heart
    Does my hands not touch your delicate soul
    Does my eyes not see the deliciousness of your countenance
    Does the wind not blow through your hair
    Does your lips not curve into a smile when you see me
    Or is it simply that you don't care.

  • 3 years ago

    by Buffie Frericks

    I very much love your poem it said exactly what I am feeling in my life right now.