Very unique I liked it! You tell a story in ur own unique way thats what I like so much about this poem! Check out mine if u would Thanx! I think u should write more poems like this exellent work! Take Care!

yes its unique poem..and keeps u glued and interested throughout...very flowing...and well written...keep writing!!! u got talent there!!

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FANTISTIC. I loved it. I have NEVER, EVER read anything like that before. When you get a chance, will you please read and comment on mine please.

Wow, this poem contains so vivid imagery, and the choice of words in it is great. This is my favorite one of yours, so deep and touching. I like it from the beginning to the end, every stanza is excellently written.
5/5 but you deserve more for this piece.
Keep writing!