Comments : You didn't hear my cry(just another suicide)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kalyn

    awesome poem. a little sad and brought back memorys but great job. keep up the great work!!!!!!!!
    Kalyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Amit

    excellent poem christina. expressive / emotional / heartfelt

    5/5. take care, always believe in love.

    love, amit ~

  • 18 years ago

    by Fierce

    Awesome Job...I loved it sooo much!!
    Your poems are so touching and I wish that I could do that.. Please check them out and tell me how to improve...
    It would mean so much to me!!!
    Keep the Faith
    Peace Out

  • 18 years ago

    by Sam

    holy crap! this is the best poem ever, made me cry alittle, but i like that in a poem, so full of emotion, if you have time please try and check out mine! Love sam

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    This was another awesome poem Christina! You rock! I luv ya! <3

    ~Krissy

    *hugs*

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    Wow, that was really amazing, it's poems like that that send shivers down my spine. So sad.... :(
    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Wow if that wasn't your "best" then you must be brilliant because that was amazing!!! There was a part that i could really relate too,
    ***I was tired of people talking
    About what they didn't know
    Thinking I was living perfectly
    Just by what I show***

    I loved it was moving and unique!
    Tash
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa Marie

    WOW what an awesome poem!!! I loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by ~ ! ~ SARAH : ) ~ ! ~

    Wow I loved the poem!!! it was awesome ... and made me think !!! Keep up the good work ... im not thta great at writeing poems but i love reading others ....

  • 18 years ago

    by stephalee

    wow this is like SOOOOOOO good keep it up!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by angel of death

    That is an extremely good poem! great job!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Britt

    awesome job and great poem, i loved it~
    *Brittany*

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    I love your poem. Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cassie

    It's by far definately not a dumb poem... i really really love it, my favorite lines were I cry when you can't see
    When you can't hear, I scream" I dunno why but those two lines stick in my mind... i love how they could be manipulated into a totally different idea... thank you so much... you brought back a spark of inspiration... i'm going to go write now...:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor

    this poem is really great! i love it! i can relate and so can many others! it's beautifully sad and creative! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Christina! How can you say it's a dumb poem and not one of your best. I love this poem. It is so sad, but it is really well-written. It's one of the best I have ever read. and I'm not just saying that because you're my best friend. I seriously mean it. Oh, and by the way, if you ever need to talk, you know I'm here, right?

  • 18 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Aww, That was really good, It flowed nicely. Check mine out sometime. Keep up the great work

    Happy Easter <3<3
    xoxo
    Aubs

  • 18 years ago

    by D..

    it is very very good, and sadly so true for many, but not for you hey! we need your talents and everyone hears YOU when you WRITE thats for sure...Hugs Doreen 5/5

  • this relates to me almost in everyway and its scary i love this poem its wonderful 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    fabulous poem, thumbs up :) xox