this was a really good poem, 5/5, i can relate to it also, my dad used to beat me. plez vote and comment on some of my poems
harley

Wow, the last two lines are very powerful, this poem is great.
I hope you're okay.
Lx

Hey loved this poem, Thanks for reading "Hopeless girl" 5/5

Aww hun. I can relate very well to this poem. Words are disspearing from my mouth right now, but i can tell you this is very sad and painful.

I hope you are okay hun <3.

Love,
Kal.

Exquisite poem from you, my friend. Beautiful. I love it. Keep up the awesome work...:) tata

Eden