awww...you are a great writer...that amazed me...I can relate alot. I hope everything is okay.

hey--
Good poem..but who ever you wrote this about, i know where he/she is coming from. Obviously she is depressed, and screaming out for help. I know how you feel too, though. I can't really say ne thing, because i dont even know him/her but if it's anything that i went tho, I didn't see what i was doing to my friend who really cared. I put my trust in this other friend and got hurt badly. That girl could re late so good. Pretending to be someone else is all i could do.... I hope she doesnt get hurt like i did...but the way it seems she already has.
--alexandra

hey thats a really good poem......ivve ben through the same thing and if you think its gonna get better it wont it only gets worse......sry but the truth hurts!!!!!!!!!

T.T makes me want to cry.....i lost one of my friends, and reading this makes me feel thousands of emotions at once. i love this it's sooooo soooo???
BEAUTIFUL. T.T
great job.
Always,
-Kit

great work. i love it.
hope things r ok
sam xxxx

Jolly good work my dear. I liked it very well. The story it tells is so often the story of many torn apart friendships. I am sorry that if it happened between you and a good friend. A terrible thing to have happen. Now back to the poem, all and all I give it a 5. Keep writting my dear. Let your mind wonder and never fear to write it down on a piece of paper and share it. Beauty is also made by ones poetic words. Cheers!

-Fallen

Awesome poem. Keep up the good work. And thanks for commenting on my one! Really appreciated. Luv Nicole =)

Thats what i feel im doing rite now......i hope i dont just go with out a fight