great poem good job is 2 thumbs way way up for that poem good job.

just amazing, brilliant descriptions and interesting poem, i have enjoyed reading your poems, sorry to here about your predicament with the girl and boy, i'm going out with a girl and she is the best thing thats happened to me..

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I loved this poem. The flow was awesome and the rhyming was perfect. Your very talented. Keep up the great work ♥

A great twist at the end there, really love this one! I love your poems, such a varied style, you really are amazingly talented 5/5 So definately in my favourites now! x

Nicely done. Truly painted a picture for me on the last moments she had left. Keep up the good work.

That was a realy good poem! 5/5

I loved it. you are really talented and I think that you should keep it up. :) 5/5

Great peice, though i feel that the 4th stanza was slightly weaker than the rest this hardly effects the overall peice in any adverse mannor as the remander has such power to not be effected (that did make sence in my mind but really doesn't now... hope you understand what i meant).

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Another really poweful poem. Your image of Hell being a beautiful place - the one place that can rid you of the pains of real life. Great imagery - it works so well in context. Amazing piece.

Peace. [Sole]

Wow great piece.. you had an excellent rhyming scheme to it.. i loved it a very powerful piece.. great job 5/5

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