Wow very well written! I love the whole idea of the poem! It was creative and you painted a great picture in my mind as I read the poem. It was sad but you did an amazing job! Brilliant~ Take Care! Brooke~

Wow, that is so beautiful written, so many perfect words and it made me picture the whole poem in my head!!! I love it....AMAZING!!!

*hugs Sabrina*

in the last paragraph, "threw" should be "through" =)

Anyway, good poem...it reminds me of my friend Caitlin, who has some of the same problems. Great write.

amazing!! i love it!!

5.5

love & hugs

Yet another great poem. I encourage you to keep them coming.

~*~Christina~*~

This was sad. But again. written beautifully. I love it

wow...absolutely brilliant!!! amazing poem. keep it up!
-xXx-

wow.. thats really awesome keep on wirting

Good poem, some great lines. Remember to test out new ways of writing, break free from structure and create your very original type of structure and style. I can see a style developed though, you have some strong last lines that really sums up what you are talking about which is good because it creates a very clear and precise image. Again, another story that is strong and sad, you are a good writer who is independent in thought and action, GOOD WORK! Keep strong and may light fill your heart and soul and his!

OMG
Do you know me ???it sounds like you are writing about me
A brilliant piece of work

This was an extremely sad piece of writing, very original and creative. You are indeed a gifted poet.

Warm regards,

Steve

5/5. This is like the most amazing poem that has ever touched me! Thank you for the poem comment. Just returning it and by the way GREAT PROFILE! Loved what you wrote in there.

This is a realli good poem. i realli liked it. 5/5
manda