Comments : The Untold Lies Part 2

  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal

    this is mad.... cool second part to da first....

  • 18 years ago

    by amanda c

    Wow

  • 18 years ago

    by chiharu

    Its great

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    Great poem, nice development. Pwerful emtion. Good job! Read some of mine if you get time.

  • 18 years ago

    by SexMeister69

    Cool poem, girl. Lovely, unique. Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by UnderAge Dying

    This poem is great. keep up the good work.