This is amazing i am so amazed at how wonderful you write. keep up the good work, Trisha

Thanks so muxh for the coment it means alot.

This poem really touched me. it is such an amazing write. i love the way you described it as someone else that was interesting. and for one of the persons peers to be the one writing of her pain this poem brought back lots of memories and i realize that now the pain doesn't matter you get immuned to it for a long time then one day it jus tares you apart. its a hard chapter* to go through in ones life. but one will get through it. great write. i like to sort of advertise poems i like. if i gave you credit (i would just paste your internet link by it) would you mind if i emailed it to a couple of my friends? i like to do this b/c you for one might get more votes and i like people to see a good poem. get back to me?
thanks, take care.. totally love it
if you want you can email me too.

That Was Very Pretty! I Couldn't Believe How Great That Poem Was! It Was So In Depth, It Had Alot Of Meaning To It 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Thts so sad:'(
is it about any1?
keep up the good work

That was too good! I absolutely LOVED it.

Wow, this poem was really good, but the repetitive first lines in the stanzas were kinda annoying after a while.

I think the repeating made it flow along with the rhyming.
Great job.
=D

Very deep and emotional. i could jut see a girrl in pain as i read it. Amazing. I just loved it!

This is amazing! A really deep write that's extremely touching. Once again, great use of emotions and rhythm..

5/5