Comments : Set you Free

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great flow and expression in this peice. and the rhyming sems very natural and not at all forced.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Excellent poem, this was great!

    Love,
    Line

  • 17 years ago

    by Ariana

    I like the simple language you have used here, it makes the piece sound more realistic. Usually I hate rhyme (lol as stated in my other review), but I liked the rhyming in this, I think it came naturally and added to the piece. I also liked how you focus on describing your sadness rather than your love for Mr. Man, simply because in this context it's a different perspective to what I usually read. :)

  • So take it all away
    My life and my pain
    My death will set you free
    I wont die in vain

    OuCh!..
    HeHeH..
    aNyWaY, grEaT pOem!!.. ^^,