I love this poem, it seems to have a lot of meaning in it, you are a very talented writer and i cant wait to read more of your stuff, if you ever need to talk feel free to email me, please comment on some of my poems it will be greatly appreciated.
love cass xoxo

Aye dis was gwd i loved the last sentence...overall gwd work....love dia mwaz xoxo

Great poem! i love the metaphor. keep it up!
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