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  • Amazingly good to my point of veiw. 5/5 u should title this "dear Diary" or something like "my diary secrets that;d be cool.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessi

    This poem is amazing. It is deep and true. I wish I could write as good as you. I seem to have come to a dry spot. I can't write at moment. I really liked your poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mel

    Wow this poem was intense. i like the format, like the dear diary thing, it was unusual and cool. the rhyming was also good. it was awesome!

    if u could check out my poem *over it*...i would really appreciate it!!

    ..mel..

  • 17 years ago

    by That LilyLash

    Wow!dis poem is reli reli good id lv 2 ryt lyk u
    u obveiously took it frm wht u feel n im fink its jst awesime keep it up x
    lily xx

  • 17 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    Really really good!!!!! like it a lot!
    Amanda

  • 17 years ago

    by .x.pain&hate.x.

    You are a really really talented writer, this poem is so good! i wish i could write like you, i don't think i am any good. 5/5 it's really good.
    xx

  • I loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by .x.pain&hate.x.

    I really really love this poem
    i wish i could write like you,
    and sometimes its like youv taken the words right out of my heart.
    keep writing. x♥

  • 17 years ago

    by .x.pain&hate.x.

    I really really love this poem
    i wish i could write like you,
    and sometimes its like youv taken the words right out of my heart.
    keep writing. x♥