Comments : Understand

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I liked it. It had a lot of emotion in it, but it didn't flow that great in someplaces. It was still really good though! Keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    I really liked this alot. Losing someones trust is one of the worst feelings in the world. And you did a really great job on expressing that. But by the sounds of this poem, You deserve it back. Hope everything goes well =]

    5/5 It was awesome! =] Keep it up!

    `taleee xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow this poem is very deep & emotional. You did a great job at expressing your feelings in this & it really touched my heart. Great job on this!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Heyy i really like this poem, your an awesome writer :) wonderful job!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Haunting poem. More of a narrative but the emotions were there and I can sense some confusion but that might just be me.

  • 17 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Lovely structure this poem...flowed like a stream of thoughts...it jumped about and had a varied pace...and the content in itself was very very sad. I like the irony in the last line, I got the impression in the midst of it all there was anything but comprehension...which made it even sadder.

    Super poem.

    [lost_laureate - come find me]

  • 17 years ago

    by Sondos

    I like this you've definitely made the effort to portray a deep emotion just perfect your rhyme scheme and it would be perfect

    Sondos

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I love this poem. It's descriptive yet very sad. The flow and everything that I like in a good poem was there. Keep up the good work Hun.

  • 17 years ago

    by erica

    Hey! i havent been on this site in forever, but u left me a cmment a lng time ago and i just wanted to say thanx!! it means alot...

    && btw this is rly good.... i hate my dad...