Its not bad... well i didnt get what it was about though....

Hey long time no talk i miss you how you been hope you been hope エ get to talk to you soon well g2g love you bye

Wow excellent poem you got there*shay*

OMG .. that's a really saddening yet beautifully written poem; I loved it, 5/5.
Much love, Emma xox

Omg its rele rele awesome .. kep it up

I loves my sassie the most out of all the people who commented =] shes my bestest friend and i loved this poem...message me sometime on msn ~mountain dew aka britts

This is a good poem. Keep it up my strawberry twin. 5/5
xoxoxo
Jess

Wow.. great poem ... soo true.. my absolute favorite line was: I cannot hear the words that make me weak, it's half past bullshit and quarter to more... deffinitely the truest line ever.... great work.. xoxox.. amber.xXx