This is so great i loved it, well done. i liked the idea of your heart beng taped up, i wrote a poem bout that too, i havent posted it tho cuz its not that great but its called my patchwork heart, so kinda similar, well done

Aww very sweet babes, well done

Interesting style of writing. The rhythm wasn't perfect but flowed well. I liked the feeling and the power behind the words. Overall great job and keep up the good work.

Very good poem. I feel the same way! =]