Comments : Not just some Fantasy

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is awesome but sad good job

    keenan sean clairmont delaney

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is good...i can relate....

    "She doesn't want to lose him,
    yet he seems so move father.
    It hurts her to see the distance increase,
    but what could she do. "

    ^^ but this part doesnt make sense to me... were you meaning in the second line to say ...
    "yet he seems to move farther".....?