Beautiful!

THiS WAS BEAUTiFUl

Congratulations by the way

Congratulations on winni9ng the poem of the week. Ive left a comment in the club, but this is what i wrote:

Hey hun,
This is an excellent read. I really enjoyed the repetition you’ve used in all of it, especiaaly the “I pray”. I lovehow you repeted the first stanza again at the last stanza, it is very affective. I also liked your repition of “Teach me” in the third stanza. The overall poem had a great flow and was very emotional. To improve I suggest you use punctuation as it helps the reader, read the poem you want it to be read. But keep writing! A well deserved winner! xx