OH MY GOD! I love it. I love it. I love it. That is one very strong poem. I love how you repeated the first stanza at the end of the poem. And it's also a very powerful stanza so that's even better!

Actually wait... no... I just read your poem again... and... EVERY FREAKIN' STANZA IS POWERFUL!

Haha, I don't think I've ever posted a comment like this before. That's how much I loved this poem.

83/5 haha =]

~ Tina

I LOVE THIS POEM!!! It's so strong and powerful. I could read it 5 more times. If I could give you higher that a 5 I would. Loved it!!!!

Amazing, wow. Blew me away!! How could you think of this? It flowed so well, trying to find a flaw the whole time but didn't see any. great job, you earned a 5/5!!

Alissa
ps
I loved the part "You want it short and sassy?
I'll make it depressing and long."

Loved it loved it loved it!

Wow...it was so interesting and sorrowful at the same time
It was definetly wonderful
I especially liked those

Kill me with silence,
Bury me with a sentence.
Get me out of jail,
Save me from remembrance

Good job
Take care
Laura

A great poem! I love it! it was sad but beautiful! awesome! good job! 5/5!

I love this stanza! :)

"Give me a piece of paper,
I'll write you a song.
You want it short and sassy?
I'll make it depressing and long."

This is really good, I love the whole theory of speaking in metaphors! Well done

Wow this was even better than the first one I read.. I loved how you titled it what you did and then did exactally that. You spoke to the reader in metaphores. Amazing work, not very many people are very good at using these and making them stick so to create an entire poem of them was a very bold move. But you pulled it off flawlessly.