I really like the repitition. It makes the whole poem have a stronger meaning an theme to it. My favorite stanza was:

I'm Moving On, without you,
because you left me all alone.
You had told me that you loved me,
but I guess I should've known.

I thought your poem was very good. 5/5

Aweh! I really loved that, and I liked how the beginning line was repeated throughout the poem; it brought the idea out more. And another thing I really enjoyed in this piece was the ending, how it kind of switched and left the reader speechless..well at least it left me speechless haha. Good job Honey!

heartchuu. 5.5

Im reading at the same time telling myslef this is what i need to be doing......moving on.......thanx for the read it helped me in a way

Good ending. the whole poem was very good with flow and rhyme. i enjoy poetry like that. So as always, I look forward to more from you. One of my favs!!!!
Charisma*

This was so beautifully written.
I loved the repetition and I thought the ending had great impact.

Thsas a really really good piece.
flow
words
everything
my favourite was the ending
its such a sad love world.
5.5
you capturted it perfectly

Just a quick note. I read this in one of the contests and had to comment. This is wonderful. The flow was excellent and the message was strong. I was reading along thinking to myself how strong and secure you sounded. It was like you had finally gotten over the heartache and was pushing ahead.... then I read that last stanza, and I thought... How sad, but true. It's hard to recover from a broken heart.

You did an exceptional job on this. Good stuff.

Jeannie