Wow~!!!...this is suh a moving piece:D
i really like the emotive words and emotions u used:D
u have a natural talent for writing about ur feelings:D
nver stop
tk care now
bree x

Great writing babe...Sad poem..it lets the reader feel your heartache

Great flow amazing wording i can relate very much i think i cried a bit it reminded me too much of my past (well not the girl part) but you know this is great piece and i give it a total
5/5\

laura

I really enjoyed reading this. you did an amazing job writing it.
5/5

=]

Very sad, but wonderful, i loved it -heather