Comments : My life was mine to take

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    "my eyes start to bleed
    my head stops to think
    why must you cry
    why do you want to die"

    this is an osm poem that i can relate to and you expressed your feelings very well 5/5 all the way

    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel

    Way to go...awesome poem..just sorry it takes such pain to have to write...