Oh that is really sad : [[ but really good! Your flow was nice and rhyming was good in most spots. It went a bit off in the middle but it wasnt extremely noticable. I think you did an excellent job and the emotion that you put into it was wonderful. I could practically feel every word. Wondeful job : ]]

Aww im sorry you feel this way..but everything will get better..i really liked this poem..the rythm was good..and you show so much feeling into it..it was an excellent poem!!!

I think thats pretty gooood. The flow was pretty good. The story was kinda heartbreaking, which means it had great emotion. I really enoyed this peice.
5.5
Xx Chrissie

P.S You are so not stupid for still loving her!

Beautiful with nice wordings and crystal clear meanings. I can understand how much you are missing Kim in the light of this piece. A well deserved 5/5

TC With love
Fsams

Veryy well written. veryy amazing! && sweet of course xx

Loving someone is never stupid...but can be very painful. I am sorry you hurt...beautiful poem.

I like the moral of this poem.
you convey a lot of feelings and emotions through the poem.

keep up the good work.
just remember to use some grammar for ease of reading.