There was a lot of emotion here. It was very good. 5/5

This is...T~T sad yet so meaningful. I actually love the ending! I mean, he won't be alone because his parents will take him there and that's a good thing. ^_^ nice poem! 5/5

I think the title fit appropriately. Although it was short, I think it told a pretty nice story. I think it could have been a little mroe deep, though.