Wow a very sad poem it most be tough for people who have gone through this 5/5

Hey, I really love this poem .. Its definately going in my favourites ... Well penned ...

fav stanza: They have been gone
For about an hour or so
She starts to cry now
Do you think her parents know?

This is so sad...i have tears in my eyes. i loved the emotion and depth you put into this, it made for a very powerful and emotional read. the opening was powerful and from there on it just got more intense...the ending was awesome, filled with such power. beautiful write.

How can you become such a sad thing into a beautiful one