Submission date : 2008-02-20
Last edit : 2008-02-20
Tammi ( F P C D )
This is a very sad and heart felt poem it tells a sad story that I can relate to I lost someone I loved very much last month and I know how you feel here great work keep them coming 5/5
nobody truly knows me ( F P C D )
Very good poem. i enjoyed it.
um, in this line "I did everything possible not to except it" it should be accept not except. sorry not trying to seem anal or whatever, but the smallest things can break a poem. i kind of stumbled over it when i saw the error, it threw the flow off.
still though, a 5 from me. i loved it.
Milton ( F C D )
I know how this feels. and I've been stuck feeling this way for a real long time. heh. but this poem was nice. it's not long but you can feel how much feelings are hurt when you read it. good stuff =)
Hey brandy...i'm so sorry you were in the situation to write something like this, but i'm so glad that such a heart warming story can come from such a terrible thing...keep up the great writing, and God bless you in your continuous poetry writing
JEFF ( F P C D )
Well writen poem, 5/5